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AMBIGUOUS LOVE (my)

funki

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AMBIGUOUS LOVE

Lone figures stand deserted in the mist,
I see your shaddow, my love, it could be bliss.

In a shady haze, my minds ablaze,
Sensation, Exploration of emotional pain
Whats to gain, when she who is one, is so vain
Misslaid angel playing dissolute games.

Rays of sunlight break the mist,
Dew from the ferns cover my forbidden lips,
I see your face......

Burning imagery in my mind,
Gusts of wind stir the trees
As i find it in myself to not deny.

I LOVE YOU
More than anything in this world,
Its my hand, your destiny, for infinity, that should be held.
I LOVE YOU
More than I love the smell of rain on a hot summers day,
Forever, in the feilds, like foxes, I dream, we play
I LOVE YOU
More than i love music and dancing the night away.

A smile wells up from my abused soul,
This loves forbidden because i live in a hole.

Longing for this moment,
For eternity,
Body quivvers, hands tremble,
My ambiguous love
It couldnt be.....

A solitary tear rushes down my hot cheeks,
Raging fires burn, as my heart skipps a beet,
Our hands reach up to meet

No matter how far i extend my arms, in desperate attempts to unite,
It will be for eternity,
For this love there is no fight,
I hide my face from the radiant light,
Tears flow like rapids gushing in the night.

You reach for me,
Your angelic bliss,
Lightning clashes,
Intense storm hitts the mist
I turn my back, out loves amiss.....

Reality is...
I run far, far away,
To my fantasy world,
where i can be.......

My passionate love,
One desire,
Loved blind,
Its not our time.

Cherish the mateship,
Cherish what we've got,
Cherish the fact its forbidden,
But were in love



-FUNKI
 
havent read your writting in a while hun :D this was a top peice and it really inspired me.

your choice of words and the rhytmn it had to it did it well to.

definantly a nice peice. one to be proud of.

kel.
 
A very well written piece of poetry, the way in which you've interwoven this tapestry of images and fleeting moments of intense emotion into a very cohesive and vivid whole. I've given up trying to find a favourite section of this poem, because I keep highlighting further and further down, more and more lines.

Its a great poem, and thanks for sharing it. :)

-plaz out-
 
Thanks guys
this realisation moved something inside of me so deeply, and well i produced the poem that is above.

plaz u little critic u :)

"fleeting moments of intense emotion" luv ya buddy
 
I read alot of shit these days, all tired boring and old. Its great to read something that actually relates to something real
 
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