Alone

[LosTSouL]

Living in this world all alone,
I feel as if I have nothing to hold,
Give me some hope, shed me some light,
For I am falling out of site,
Your help is crucial for me to survive,
But you just sit and watch as I fall from this life,
My dreams have shattered all around,
Look at the pieces lye on the ground,
I am drowning into the night,
I am becoming to weak to fight,
I feel as I am alone in space,
God, there has got to be a better place,
I don't know if I could take much more,
Someone has to unleash me and open up my door,
For I am retricted from the past,
Can you help me? Will I last?
I am falling from your grasp,
This trip I am on is happening to fast,
I beg of you catch me please,
Before my whole world begins to cease,
In this world thats so distant and cold,
I hope my sad story will remain untold,
Find me help, I can't take the pain,
Look at me I am going insane,
See my bosy rise up from the ground,
Look at all the wonders I have found,
I have no answers of my own, my words have gone astray,
Will I ever again see the brightness of the day?
Leaving me alone, to drown in the grasp of your hand,
I am surrounded by the unknown, underneath the sand,
I feel my way through, grabbing onto all I find,
Will you help me? this I plead, can u be so kind,
Round and round my mind spins,
As the darkness fills my body with sins,
The light gets broghter, then fades away,
On the ground is where I lay,
My eyes close as I leave my life behind,
For my trip is over and reality re-enters my mind =(

 

[FoX]

"Alone" is only a concept.
The only time you're REALLY alone is when you think you are....
Beautifully written.

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If it's orange and fuzzy, it's FoXy....
"Ed Meese should be ass-fucked by an acid-crazed elk."-Dr. Hunter S. Thompson
The Ultimate Truth about the Universe? (as it can best be communicated in written English) It IS.

 

[PureEnlightment]

I was alone for quite a while in my life. But life always changes for people as it has mine. I think u peice was amazing especially the rhymes! If u ever need some one to talk too my aim is : Confusionaroundu
Thanks for writing see u later much love peace

 

[lilygirl]

this poem was beautifully written...
don't give up on yourself. i know that society puts such a negative connotation on being alone but it really is a good thing. everyone must find the strength and love to help themselves, because as much as we feel we need someone to help us through bad times, they will leave us at one point or another.
try to find the good in every situation, and when you're alone you're helping yourself.
and know that there is always someone who cares for you, no matter how bad things get.
again, beautiful.
~lil
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"you will get this chance but once, don't let simple shit get you down"
therapy is expensive, poppin bubble wrap is cheap. you decide.
sn~ sparkleylily