alone while surrounded by people

[harraser]

sunburned and exhausted
alone on a packed train
I cant make out one clear word
from all the ter around me
but the drone of voices
is starting to make my head pound
thump thump thump thump
sounds remarkably like the beat
I was listening to just a little while ago
when the people I was surrounded by
were freinds instead of strangers
but after our night of freedom and fun
theyre going back to their regular lives
as am I, going back to my regular life
and just like right now, in my life
i am alone while surrounded by people
[ 29 January 2002: Message edited by: harraser ]

 

[Taliana]

I really like that, hits home.
Makes you wonder how many other people are thinking the same thing. We can all be friends/family throughout the night, but in reality, when moirning comes, we all part and go our separate ways and become strangers again by day.

 

[TecknoticDream]

Babe dat was beautiful

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

i especially loved the title....

 

[apocalyptic vendetta]

I know how that feels...

 

[Tarsarlan]

I used to know what that was like... Then those people who surrounded me became friends during the day as well as the night

 

[Adikkal]

Mmmm, nice. Good job.
On the train the morning after a rave, me and all my friends started hearing the "thump thump thump" and the other noises of the train on the tracks and we were convinced it was music. Quite odd.
Adikkal

 

[harraser]

^lol Ive had that happen to me too, usually after a good nights E'ing,I love it all the noises of the world mixing to make an unusual but beutiful music.