All it takes is one word.

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

All it takes is one word…

…and I’m falling once more.

I meant everything, I will wait.
I meant everything; you can’t be late.

We ended seeking practicality,
but we were never practical.
We ended badly,
I shouldn’t have ended.

All it takes is one word…

…and I’m where I was before.

I meant everything, always think of you.
I meant everything, no one as unique as you.

We ended because I was rash,
because I stopped being honest.
We ended because I didn’t understand.
I’m wise now.

All it takes is one word…

…from you.

 

[potato]

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[Dastrix Slogan]

Man that was good!

I like how you isolated "just one word", makes it very strong. I know that feeling of losing all my resolve when the right person says just the right thing!

 

[neverwas]

All it takes is one word…

...i love you...( it just fitted)

You write with innocence and and air of sorrow in this peice baby. It is both truthfull and brutally honest.

One of the best and most rawest things ive ever heard you write/say.

 

[up all night]

It's never just one word. It's a conversation. It's a moment. It's a memory. It's a song. It's a poem. It's everything that comes after that one word... but it's never just one word.

This was great BBG. You knew that already, though.

 

[Mary Poppins]

this poem made me feel pangs of emotion.

i really liked it...it lets you in, and makes you feel.

 

[cherub]

it is amazing piece you have written here. you feel the words, sometimes it is good to feel that much even if it is not they way you want it at that moment..