Again surface city central

[(Wordy)]

I've removed this poem for copyright reasons, pending a submission to an e-zine.

 

[New]

Haha. Nice. I felt like I was the guy at the end of the poem. Just sleeping at home while the Second Coming might be happening out of my window. I like it.%)

 

[Toltecsuperhero]

Intriguing, and very Gregory Corso. I like it a lot.

 

[(Wordy)]

Thanks for the feedback guys. Feel free to critique if you want.

very Gregory Corso

I guess I can see that. He's definitely a favourite. I admire his loose, direct, uncomplicated style.

 

[(Wordy)]

Yeah thanks, good call... I'm not sure how it ended it up like that actually. Some kind of leftover from the editing process. I like to play around with line breaks, but the break has to make sense in some way - and I don't think this single word line makes much sense.

(Revised!)

 

[emesaeler]

fucks yeah I like the style, very clear images made of blurry bubbly bits.