After

[doofqueen]

The sound
of fluttering
of wings
spreading
is rebounding in the trees

The lost
are even more lost
while the found
had lost their way

A sink
and a thud
of two
worlds colliding
is hiding
in the distance

New life
new paths
new roadblocks
new lessons
new wisdom
new play
new me

 

[New]

This is wonderful...a metaphor of rebirth followed by endless possibility.

 

[manic_panic]

a pleasure to read..over and over..thanks

 

[doofqueen]

Theres always a rainbow after a storm ...

 

[Swerlz]

i like your style doof

good job

 

[doofqueen]

thankyou

 

[cosmic charlie]

I liked it alot

great writing

 

[lostNfound]

you used my name in there%)

 

[doofqueen]

thanks cosmic

Lost - i was thinking of you of course