After midnight

[modelskinny]

Hairs raised, full attention
Cool breeze kissing my neck
Comfort in solitude, you say
I won't nod my approval
Disapproval spans my gaze
Wrinkles mapping pain
Heartache obediently follows
Why I wait for the unknown
So clearly beyond my grasp
I wait, hands folded, intent
To find my fellow solitary one

 

[panic in paradise]

Nice first entry, good to see more inspiration from the Silent Treatment.

 

[New]

I like it. Simple yet powerful.

 

[modelskinny]

Thank you. I prefer it that way.