Addict.

[Oasis]

this would be my first poem/song I post on here, I've been thinking about writing poetry and songs for a hobby. This here just came off the top of my head, please tell me what you think .

title : Addict.

Feelings of bliss, feelings of joy. The feelings I had that I've adored.
When we look eachother in the eyes, mesmerized, it takes me there.
The things I loved, the the things I cared, but you seem to overlook
all that's there.

You once had passion, you once had heart, but one euphoric thing
can tear it all apart.

Now you're left alone and you're heart is gray. I look towards you and you turned away. I prayed that you never take that path, because virgins don't
know the aftermath.

Go ahead and stick it in, I'll stay strong until the end. Our love is strong, our love is deep. But each fix drives you out of reach.

 

[Mehm]

this sounds like a personal experience. live, learn and grow though; right? thank you for sharing

 

[stonerfromohio]

Before people hop on the path of the drug world they should be presented this poem.

Very dark but very good piece of writing.