Act without thinking, wanting or needing, love bluelight "the muse"

[Freddy'J']

I have changed venerably since I wrote this poem
These symbles for meaning are no longer so awe inspiring
Knowing this I believe I see the lie
The harder you try, the sooner it will be compleat
Learning by labor of love
The question to become jaded or growing up
Days should be half full of tragic encounters
Intangible as god is addiction but also love
If you would be so greedy you can easily fill your cup
Care only for yourself or for everyone else
So many choices, for what to buy and what to sell
Knowing the wanting and acting upon it,
Is so much more majestic and golden,
Then acting without thinking, knowing your wanting, just needing
Realizing what you have become
Behind you and before you there is nothing
The truth is in the something
But, dreaming is believing and remembering the feeling
Time is a myth, that moves both fast and slow
The truth as such can not be known
Each and every day, as the sun makes its way around the earth
Is as new as the day of your birth
The goal is to never become careless
I will always remember that I have a soul
The difference between two worlds is everything
A sence of meaning so you dont fall off the edge
I guess im questioning, and answering all at once
I have become so much more venerable since I wrote this poem
Jaded, but still growing up

 

[Freddy'J']

Long time no see said the venerable green tea %)
Sorry I havnt posted much since I moved to this sn
Havnt been motivated to write much, but thought id post something so you wouldnt think I was dead.
Hope ya'll like the poem

 

[RareForm]

I have changed venerably since I wrote this poem
These symbles for meaning are no longer so awe inspiring
Knowing this I believe I see the lie
The harder you try, the sooner it will be compleat
Learning by labor of love
The question to become jaded or growing up
Days should be half full of tragic encounters
Intangible as god is addiction but also love
If you would be so greedy you can easily fill your cup
Care only for yourself or for everyone else
So many choices, for what to buy and what to sell
Knowing the wanting and acting upon it,
Is so much more majestic and golden,
Then acting without thinking, knowing your wanting, just needing
Realizing what you have become
Behind you and before you there is nothing
The truth is in the something
But, dreaming is believing and remembering the feeling
Time is a myth, that moves both fast and slow
The truth as such can not be known
Each and every day, as the sun makes its way around the earth
Is as new as the day of your birth
The goal is to never become careless
I will always remember that I have a soul
The difference between two worlds is everything
A sence of meaning so you dont fall off the edge
I guess im questioning, and answering all at once
I have become so much more venerable since I wrote this poem
Jaded, but still growing up

amazing. some insightful conceptions you got there.

 

[Pantomime7]

I like. As Rareform said, insightful thoughts. Great write........made me think.

 

[cherub]

This rocks,, I really love this,, can I print and frame it ??? I seriously really like this one,, i think it ones my favorites now you rock !

 

[Freddy'J']

Thanks for the replys, Im glad you like it. I was going to post something new but since i changed my sn from Sung to my real name ive been having writers block, dunno. Always glad when someone enjoys my work. Peace Bluelighters. Feel free to print it out and frame it, lol, just so you keep my name on there somewhere. Might not be worth much now but maybe someday %)