Acceleration

[thujone]

crystal key into brain; ignition.
brainstem; transmission.
crankshaft spine, timing belt whine
empty the fuel stores out for my mind.
spark and smoke, direct nitrous injection
zero to sixty in less than a second.
fiesty roar to break through the sore
cams rolling fast; need to inhale more.
string moments together into a while
jitter chatter-teethed smile,
quite ready for another quarter mile

 

[New]

Hah! I quite enjoyed the metaphor in this piece, but can't personally relate myself.

 

[colicolo]

^ awesome metaphor. i felt the motion of the drug induced ocean.

 

[katmeow]

This was clever.

Nice one