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doofqueen

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My really good close friend wrote this about me last night and i had to share. No one has written a poem about me before (that i know of anyway) It was really flattering and cool having someone do that for me :) What do you guys think of it? I was just like "wow" that anyone did that for me let alone thought this way about me :)

Sylvia

The girl once drew herself
black eyes
eloquently sad
long hair
grasping for freedoms door with one hand
is she leaving?
did she come in?
or did she shut the door?
two hands maybe
to grasp
maybe a different picture

The woman now knows
you can't live in the past
so moved on to the other landscapes
beyond the white room.
She laughs
dances
smiles
cares
kisses
hugs
talks
cuddles and touches
the people around her

Those who meet her
are engulfed,
by her beauty,
her energy.
Afterwards you have her radiance
a healthy afterglow about you
and you'll never forget her
 
:) its so wonderful when someone writes things about u is it not?? ive had someone do that for me and it jsut totally lifted my spirits for that day, week, month, year! heck, im still high on it now i think about it.
it's a great poem.. and this sort of poem only truly ever comes from someone that knows you really well... feel lucky u have loving ones around u and especially that they feel this way bout u.

:hugs:, chrissy
 
were you a goth?
i thought you said you had pure bogun heritage, no?
the opening few lines
The girl once drew herself
black eyes
eloquently sad
long hair


says gothic to me.


and the rest:
certainly a flattering selection of words isnt it?
 
thanks chaos man, thats a really lovely thing to say :)

dr...i never was a goth really. I went through the whole black stage but never went full goth. What hes talking about is a drawing that i did when i was younger. I represented myself in a different physical image :)
 
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