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[LiQwidVibeZ]

I finally decided to post one of my poems any opinions good or bad are welcome.
You say you care,
but you dont dare.
I reach out to you for love,
but you dismiss me like a dream.
You took your love away from me,
and keep it for yourself.
You let me fall away,
now you have to pay.
Dont be suprised when you find out
this is the end.
Ill never kiss you again
or tell you, your my soulmate.
I should of known
this is our only fate.

 

[RaveAngel]

Ahhh, that bitter sickning feeling.... I know all too well. Put into words nicely kidd.
*muah*
Ski
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"Shine on you crazy diamond....."

 

[LapDawg]

Jess-
You know my opinion. Be strong kiddo (((Jess)))
Jeff

 

[LiQwidVibeZ]

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