A wonder year in the forest.

[d1giPhux]

Have you felt the shining stars,
Or in the forest way afar,
Has she spoken in your ear,
Words so soft,
You cannot hear,
In the forest i can be,
Running free,
for Eternity,
And there she is,
a spoken word,
A falling branch,
you've never heard,
In the forest,
They all glow green,
New with life,
never seen,
waiting for you to come,
In the forest,
Away from,
Everything you ever knew,
Exploring worlds,
As Time has grew,
A thousand years,
A minute passed,
A life i love,
It never lasts,
So when you find me here again,
In my world,It never ends,
And when she speaks,
into your ear,
Remember this,
A wonder year.
[ 19 December 2002: Message edited by: d1giPhux ]

 

[vurtomatic]

the rhyme, the flow, imageries and ideas... well done!
a suggestion, maybe u can break it up into stanzas to go with the rhyme.
i love this
[ 19 December 2002: Message edited by: vurtomatic ]

 

[d1giPhux]

Thank you =] I have experienced this place many times, its my favorite place to be =]

 

[potato]

wow.Whispering this poem to myself, the meter made me shiver. I know where this place you speak of is, I've tried to find it with words too. Mine is not a forest but a beach beyond this sky.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Thanks for the bump! Something just about saying the phrase "a wonder year" sounds so good

 

[Psychedelics_r_best]

Good poem man.

As Time has grew,
A thousand years,
A minute passed,
A life i love,
It never lasts,

I think I have been here in ages past. I think I have been to the place your poem speaks of.