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A series of 6 Haikus which tell which tell a small but lovely story...

*Cosmic Mist*

Bluelighter
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I know that these don't exactly follow the traditional rules of the japanese haiku, but these days anything goes right? They've still got the 5-7-5 thing happening, but i like the content more than the tradtional stuff... It's aaaaaalll good... :)
I
Into the unknown
Discovery of new life
In another's eyes
II
Slowly sets the sun
A meeting in the darkness
Apprehension builds
III
Lust deep and urgent
Silent whispers in the dark
Sweet the scent of sweat
IV
Shivers in the warmth
Explosion of boundaries
Slow ecstatic sighs
V
New love born within
the awakening of two souls
Tensions now released
VI
Lying side by side
The sun rises once again
Friends become Lovers
 
this is beautiful and im sad i missed it the first time. archive please?
 
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