a really short poem: "Dear Coke"

[Jert]

helloo hope everyone is having a happy 2-0-0----7 .. !





Dear Coke

I would rather you break into my living room
and ask me for 1.98 -- a knife in hand
than pretend you are my friend
with colors and beauty
and dishonesty
from the television

 

[Toltecsuperhero]

goddam right. Add on every other heavily commercially promoted product and you just might have something.

 

[(Wordy)]

Well said, Jert. I feel the same way.

 

[up all night]

There's nothing like getting straight to the point. Liked it a lot.

 

[Jert]

Thanks for the feedback; glad y'all enjoyed it.