a quarter mile away from revenge

[sc4t]

how's it feel bitch?
sitting back, sipping on your iced tea, browsing myspace and talking to your new one
guess what mother fucker
i found my rusty old .357
yeah that's right, i found it
up in the attick
i don't know what's gonna happen
i already shot my door, it work's
it still fires
the kick nearly sent me through the wall
want to see what this magnum does to a pretty little girl's face?
you'll see soon enough
cause guess what bitch
i'm comin' over now
only a quarter mile away from revenge
redemption
hatred
perverted thoughts stab through my brain, yours too?
that's too fuckin' bad
it's too late

 

[preacha]

eminem could have made that rhyme though

 

[sc4t]

i wasn't aiming toward a rap but a more violent take on this

any other comments?

 

[echo off]

well its certainly violent, but i find it slightly too fast... those types of thoughts tend to be long winded... that is if its meant to be thoughts instead of feelings.

either way, be careful... you can get expelled from school for something like this now. Kinda.