a poem i finished of my mothers

[Jabberwocky]

My mother died earlier this year so imagine my suprise when i unearthed a poem i had finished of hers when she became to sick to do it herself. its short but its truely the only thing i have that i worked on with my mother who was a published author"

Today we sleep
Tonight we dream
And dream we always shall
For dreams are the windows to our destinies
Our hopes, fears, memories
Spiraling around our consciousness
Waiting for an opportunity to remind us
That we are human
That we are loved
That if nothing else
We will always dream
And in these dreams
We will live forever

my mother started the first stanza and i finished the rest.

linda and phil-

 

[punktuality]

beautiful...

 

[Bi KaNd*E* RaVeR]

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by liquidphil1
Waiting for an opportunity to remind us
That we are human
That we are loved
That if nothing else
We will always dream
And in these dreams
We will live forever

^This was touching, like a warm wet cloth held by a strong hand, washing my face clean.
Just beautiful. You did a great job finishing this.

 

[froggygirl]

I liked it a lot.. amazing peice..
You really did do a wonderful job finishing it..

I think she'd be very proud of you..

 

[cherub]

this is awesome, and knowing how it began and ended was just even more touching.

*big hugs*

 

[katmeow]

My mum was making a collection of inspiring quotes which she wanted to have published as a book for motivating sports people (our family is pretty involved in sport)... she never finished it and I said at her funeral I wanted to get it done, but I haven't. Thanks for some inspiration

Beautiful piece of work.