a minute past m i d n i g h t

[mariacallas]

and the ghost of a smile danced across your face
i saw you, you saw me
feathering through bee stings to fasten myself
hypnotized by you if I should linger
spinning in the cave
for the scarlet thing in you
my, how one-word sentences have power
beneath the avalanche of want I learnt to cower
since then we have shared the last ninety days with each other
sipping on each other's stories and dreams,
we have never kissed
yet your footprints are on my floor
i have memorized the music in your heart
and here I stand a minute past midnight,
feathering freely formed kisses to your forehead
all i know is i love you

 

[brothermarcus]

good personal piece

 

[RareForm]

beautiful and perfectly worded.

 

[AmorRoark]

man oh man I wish I could write like you

we have never kissed
yet your footprints are on my floor
i have memorized the music in your heart
and here I stand a minute past midnight,
feathering freely formed kisses to your forehead
all i know is i love you

I could feel the power of your words run through my blood!

 

[Negative]

stunning . . .

 

[onetwothreefour]

when you write like this you write the best.

this is the kind of stuff you read in published books. stunning work, seriously.

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

It's not often that I read something and give the following response:

Wow, fantastic, totally awesome.

Every word is needed there is no excess, there is only feeling but not in this. That makes no sense, I liked this...

 

[David]

Very sweet, and flowing. Reminds me of someone I once knew.

 

[mariacallas]

omg i love you guys...thank u for liking this.
i actually wrote this in a much shorter span of time then my other pieces....
and a bit inebriated lol...
if only i can recapture the formula again