A Meretricious Wasteland

[RareForm]

Collaboration with Altered_Soul9

Most of what I say is meaningless
The time we waste away is for the best
Never never seemed so close to me
Is why my enmity is looping
Her soul radiates a translucent blue
She's telling me what's best for me and you
Counterfitting outfits with consistency
Like the revenant goes prophesying

I have the answers you're trying to find
Choose which door you'll look behind

Standing within a vestabul covered in sin
No place to forgive no time to condemn
A finger points to an unwavering eye
Amidst stained light thoughts end in sigh
Souls mutated with a slight of wrist
Untrained we catch a glimpse, immortality through the mist

I have the answers you're trying to find
Choose which door you'll look behind

Hopeless for winnings this spinning black hole
Fore go the present for visions untold
Disorienting illusion that is amusing
Respawning us back into a familiar reputing
Escape, dare to escape in a wake of reality

 

[Sexy.Sadie]

I adore you.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I love this piece, High rollin' son.

 

[cherub]

First,, I like when you both write together,, there always seems to be a balance,,that should tell you something.

the flow is nice ,,, btw,, whats the answers ? lol

 

[DeirdreScott]

Rare, you are without a doubt the most talented poet I know... You have the most definite style... I knew who wrote this poem just by looking at the title. You're a fecking genius.

 

[RareForm]

First,, I like when you both write together,, there always seems to be a balance,,that should tell you something.

the flow is nice ,,, btw,, whats the answers ? lol

the revenant and her i suppose :D

thanks very much for your compliments DS.

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