a grotesque love poem

[poisoned candy]

Look at me.
Touch my skin, beneath your fingers.
Stare into my eyes, my pupils dilating.
Hear my voice, my words rolling on asphalt.
Taste my lips.

See my dreams
as we lie next to each other in sleep.
Drape yourself around me, be my cloth.
Listen to my breath, heaving deeper.
Lick my skin.

Inspect me
as I stand before you naked.
Probe the deep insides of my cavities.
Feel me throb and spurt within you.
Swallow my juices.

Now take a knife
and open me up.

Stare at my organs
as they pour out of my shell, intenstines unwrapping.
Sieze my brain, tear it between your fingers,
uncovering my most hidden compartments.
Chew my flesh.

Do all this, and you will have uncovered
who I am.

 

[cherub]

I Really Like the thought process behind this,, explosing who we are so openingly and out there, nice work!

 

[ashaman]

i love the style from a lovey, happy poem which then flows into a dark, grotesque one. great!