.:A DARKENED PLAYGROUND:.

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

.:A DARKENED PLAYGROUND:.

Through a sleeping mind
A million words will blow
Whistling random sharpened tunes
Ebbing with the flow.

Rhythym is an absent here
Time lies bare, on edge
Smouldering with the weakened links
Safely lined to dredge.

The colours stand precarious
Looking to the fall
Imminence seems to knock them flat
Lifeless, fooling all.

 

[katmeow]

Very nice, very lyrical

good stuff!

 

[Dandy]

I loved this.
Thoughts and Dreams,
and
Dreams and Thoughts.
Reminded me of "Reflection" by TOOL.
That was the song I associated with the piece. Some pieces draw some resemblance to a feeling I get listening to a specific song and I drew a connection.
I hope I get a chance to speak to you about this piece later tonight, I am interested to know some things about it.

 

[RareForm]

i love all of your poetry...your style is good..

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^^ I agree. I liked the moody feel of this.

 

[up all night]

She does indeed have a most interesting mind. Loving all your work COTB.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

^Thank-you everyone, the caliber of all of your writing makes all of these compliments all the more meaningful.

I know my pieces aren't the easiest to read [they're seeped in a lot of riddles and concentrated meanings]..
I'm so glad you all get something out of them.