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A couple poems

rorylee

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Rift

Stimulate my mind,
and create a path to my body and soul
what is there for any and all to gain
by choosing the right path
those seeking eternal salvation can follow the word
those who do not can die as mortals

with every breathe i choke
with every effort i fall
at every chance i run
the conditions we now suffer
is my fault and my fault alone
i told the truth in order for you to open your eyes
that is what i must consider

the day of reckoning approaches
it’s time to open your eyes and
let the path show you the way
would we be not be ignorant and deserving of punishment
for falling to see the plan truth before us

from you we learn
learn of our revolution of destiny
should we dispatch from the place you came?
we do not require full faith
only to believe what u see, hear and know to be true

if there’s one thing worse then dying here
it’s living under my skin and i refuse to do either
feel me inside, touch me deeper than the skin
taste the truth, taste how alive you can become

with every breathe i choke
with every effort i fall
at every chance i run
the conditions we now suffer
is my fault and my fault alone
i told the truth in order for you to open your eyes
that is what i must consider

(life and death
light and darkness
hope and despair
a rift was created
its all for you.)


Mind blowing

A shepherd must attend to his folk
and fight off the wolfs.
An old man once said
if we win the fight
we can build a whole new world
everyone's cup is half full
until u can wake up and smell the roses

I see this world in your eyes, it's relentless
and relax and let me have your crown for a minute
cause dam girl your beautiful
and this will not only
blow your mind away

Sex is like air
have u got anything to declare?
our eyes are only a tool, we see with our brains
the shadows of our bodies
need to breathe in our shadows
its been along time
since i smelt
beautiful, beautiful

growing old is mandatory
but growing up is optional
lets be defiant to the end
and fly overhead
our victories and loses
are shared by more then you know
stay with us, stay the course
cause I want you

I see the world in your eyes, it's relentless
and relax and let me have your crown for a minute
cause dam girl your beautiful
and this will not only
blow your mind away.


Yet to be Named

(before 21st, 22nd and the 5th)

you get this pain deep down
and it makes you want to cry
you wont be able to justify
the cause of this pain
you keep feeling it
you keep seeing it

don't even try to ignore it
don't even think about painkillers
the only resolution to this
is to go where your heart desires

i sit back down
i close my eyes
i see only darkness
but i see another world within

why do i see only darkness
why do i see only pain
why do i like this
whyyyyyy do i like this
is this punishment for something
is this vengeance for something

drain the pressure from the pain
the sensation of your true desire is overwhelming

im only a Buddha?
its hard to soar with life
when your surrounded by pain
there's no hiding the truth
if it makes u feel better
i want to relish my soul
i went to the eye of my one true desire

you get this pain deep down
and it makes you want to cry
you wont be able to justify
the cause of this pain
you'll keep feeling it
you'll keep seeing it

why do i see only darkness
why do i see only pain
why do i like this
i need a change

stop and think twice im truly the chosen one
im going to make you pay
oh mighty pain
oh mighty pain
cause im going to land where my heart desires
im going to land where my heart desires
im going to land
im going to land.
 
I apprecate some of your metaphores, they remind me a bit of aesops tales in structure. There were a few favorite lines of your poems:

Stimulate my mind,
and create a path to my body and soul
what is there for any and all to gain
by choosing the right path
those seeking eternal salvation can follow the word
those who do not can die as mortals

I find this so incredibly true. I am not much of a believer in fire and brim stone and belive very much that all roads lead to the path of enlightenment. You can chose to be enlightened or you can chose to get off the path, the only hell is spiritual hell. Should you not chose to embark you are just that mortal that is the only consequence, the not knowing.

I see the world in your eyes, it's relentless
and relax and let me have your crown for a minute

I really appreciate the imagery of relentless eyes. its speaks volumes of what they could not say and what we hoped they would or fear they might.
 
omg wow i dont think anyone has ever really gotten it before, you pretty much nailed it, the eyes say more then you know, in the same way the thought of what your eyes see overlaps any other thought or you have no choice in that thought. However i believe in the brimstone and fire when embarking on my path =]
 
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