A Cosmic Love

[VSlazorlightning]

Under existance,
through a noble flash of light,
we find
truth of the purest kind.
Spilling
not from mouths or minds
but hearts
so dangerously intertwined
as to be galaxies
battling over their time
to make the other shine.
A cosmic love, epiphany
if two worlds could be combined
Bound, in love and trust
in the alterating gravity
that throws the orbits about
in the most interesting ways,
Beautiful, a gravitational heave on open ground
Creation pulls life from sound
in the endless possibilities of our cosmic love...

 

[ArCi]

Very nice! That was actually really fun to read. I love the rhyme scheme.

My favorite part:

"Spilling
not from mouths or minds
but hearts
so dangerously intertwined
as to be galaxies
battling over their time
to make the other shine.
A cosmic love, epiphany
if two worlds could be combined"

 

[VSlazorlightning]

If only.... It's a vision I had. A very beautiful one. I guess you would call that a loose or sloppy rhyming scheme IDK. I like to try to stick with the natural rhythm the words present, it makes them kind of flow off the tongue.

 

[panic in paradise]

"Creation pulls life from sound
in the endless possibilities of our cosmic love..."

Endless existence; replied an echo.