A Chance that Things May Grow

[alostlittlebird]

You've got
some kind of
gentle appeal, alluring.

Your voice,
like quiet honey slowly dripping
sweet, and soothing

I try to speak to you
and end up drowning in the thought of the words I could say
I try to look at you
your eyes just pick me up and blow me away

What kind of force is this?
I can not recognize,
The kind of mystery
that's drawn me to your eyes.
There is a piece of me,
I think it's been paralyzed

You make me feel it
Make it stronger
Bring my senses alive.

There is a place in me,
I'd like to let you inside
I think you're welcome there
past all the layers and lies

Cause when I'm next to you
the air between us dances
light reflects off of the future
and now I take my chances.


~ jeremy 12.22.04

 

[Shnouzerpuff]

great work dude.

I like:

I try to speak to you
and end up drowning in the thought of the words I could say
I try to look at you
your eyes just pick me up and blow me away


and I also like:

Cause when I'm next to you
the air between us dances
light reflects off of the future
and now I take my chances.



But it is all honestly really good.

Thanks.

 

[Dekloren]

A guy wrote this?

Wow

 

[RareForm]

wow nice work.

beautifully written. a visual of sorts.

 

[alostlittlebird]

thanks

its about a girl that makes me think about things differently