8 Bar (Off The Dome) Freestyles.

[HdoubleODeezy]

Ok rules will be simple.

8 Lines of rhymes or "bars"

They can either be whatever your personal writing style is.
OR
Some do .

1 line ending with no comma
2 Rhyme in second line or all of them if you wanna

(My style is):

1 Rhyme in first line then, and rhyme after a comma and then it ends-
2 Would either rhyme with the first, or have a new thought on spot for me to rehearse.

THESE WERE ONLY TWO LINES JUST TO EXPLAIN A COUPLE DIFFERENT WAYS TO GO ABOUT IT.
But in the thread it will be 8 bars/lines, no more no less.


I think you get the point. 8 Bar typed freestyles, there's no timing but try to keep it off the head as much as possible.

-HOOD

 

[HdoubleODeezy]

I'll start-

Where to begin? Probably where i'll leave off,
Bout to start a binge, bitch grab me some Smirnoff,
I chug the bottle and it has no effect, guess no harm in popping a few Percocet,
Still feeling nothing, damn tolerance must be high or something,
My tolerance is high which means I wont be, catching a buzz of these two drugs only,
Time to pop a benzo yeah that's an idea, took 4 etizolams and nothing still that i can feel,
Time to start from the beginning and try it all again, I told you from the start i had no idea where I'd end,
Repeat steps one more time in that same night, almost caught a damn flat line and woke up to flashing lights.

-HOOD

 

[Corazon]

Damn HOOD, slow down!, I'm not trying to preach regardless of how it sounds
mixing all those drugs will put you under the ground,
I can't fuck with benzos, it fucks with my brain,
or i take too much, or i take too much, or i take too much, or i... lose like 3 or 4 days,
but I can relate, used to sniff like a brick a week,
that's 40 bags for me, a few for my hookup, and a few for a freak,
I quit all that shit, and life still isn't easy, but i'm going to live on my terms as long as I'm breathing,
in fact life is hard, like trying to write 8 bars when you thinking of luxury cars and latina future lovers the color of cocoa butter......

 

[Kittycat5]

Gonna give this a shot, though not really a rhymer
So cut me some slack, as a greenhorn first timer
Feel bad for you pillheads risking time, cash and health
Cuz I dont need no dealer, just take it right off the shelf
Opana,xannies,vikes and addy, dillies, percs and blues
My biggest daily problem is which ones should I choose
Buckle down and study, earn the necessary degree
Then dreams come true, for all your drugs forever will be free

 

[HdoubleODeezy]

Who am i to judge kittycat? but since you asked- it's pretty good. just as good as the two posted before it.

People keep em comin, this isn't like the battle thread where everyone needs to outdo each other, it's just all in fun and for practice and to see what we as a group can come up with.

Everyone's work is appreciated equally, as long as they contribute.

 

[ozzmotik]

omg how can i / explain my meaning without
sounding conceited, i'm defeated internally
eternally remaining confirmed to be
absurdity; unsure, recede, and
i deceive my beliefs into conceding
that there's no giving without receiving