7 poems, mostly unrelated, 5 lines.

[breakyaself]

I wrote about you
With feeling on my fingertips
And childish wishes - Bring me closer
To pragmatism, ill never be a slave
Obviously
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Black baby blood
Wash me with your fetid soul
Dangerous history
Absolves
My murderous inclinations
__________________________

So so pretty
Gestures that decide it so
False fantasties for sale
Bread, water , wine
You are mine (not so exclusively)
__________________________

Im seeing hearing
Belief from other sources
Mixed up, shake it
Baby likes it
I like it shaken up
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False eyes flash
And im losing the correct state
To your flesh
Touch Touch
Hearts and love corrupted
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Its not that state
Where you feel so sad
That I worry I will fall easily into
But that other one
That silently aches of emptiness
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I fucked everything for nothing
Shame clogs my airways
Im a little less likely to believe my daily hype today
Laziness has birthed destruction
For your viewing pleasures

 

[yakksoho]

A strong relation; words that decide it so.

 

[katmeow]

You really should write more often.

 

[MR Candyslut]

You write beautifully breakyabeat.

Some of your imagery is fantastic.

I particularly liked the last one.

 

[up all night]

I can't decide whether I like these because they're short and there's so much surrounding them or whether I wish they were longer.

Either way, I liked them.

 

[colicolo]

deffinitly keep writing. I'd love to see these ones expanded:

I fucked everything for nothing
Shame clogs my airways
Im a little less likely to believe my daily hype today
Laziness has birthed destruction
For your viewing pleasures

I wrote about you
With feeling on my fingertips
And childish wishes - Bring me closer
To pragmatism, ill never be a slave
Obviously

my favourites, particulary the opening lines, they captured my attention instantly.

 

[Raz]

You really should write more often.

what she said.

The way you interpret/express in your writing is fascinating and always layered.