6:01

[RareForm]

Are you ready tonight?
Something doesn't feel right.
Here a touch
There a touch, touch.
Unable to grasp the concept of this action.
Things were so different way back when,
I was innocent and my smile followed me.
Oh it seems a deep sleep, I pretend to be.
What creeps into my thoughts is an unlikely aversion.
It's clear now I see, this is an act of perversion.
How could I not see?
It's there so blatantly.
How could I fall for such stupid tricks.
Oh that's right, it's because I was six.

 

[skjalff]

i think i felt this way before..

 

[i_enjoy_ecstasy]

i KNOW ive felt like this...nice work RareForm

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Oh it seems a deep sleep, I pretend to be

A standout clever piece, but the line above sinks in the most!

 

[Altered_Soul9]

A very deep piece my freind. very nice

 

[Pantomime7]

S

 

[Pantomime7]

STRANGE YET DEEP! Me like.

 

[onetwothreefour]

this isn't a piece that amazes me like yours usually do, but it's very intruiging. "deep" like everyone else says. i'd like to know what's behind it, but in another way i don't think i would.