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I

Are you sure you want to permanently
delete these messages? They

came in peace, blind

candling

across the night

to beg but a shred of mercy


II

In the interview you’re like

an apple halved
showing white

How you enjoy the sound of
other people’s voices! you

limply unscroll

somehow catch a splinter
of Paris,

cobbles slick with rain


III

I am an artist,
a painter!

when I paint sea

sea is not
immobile in the landscape!

oh no no

waves devour the shore,
arguing against our deaths!

Give me a cigarette!


(c) Stu Hatton 2006

http://wordyness.blogspot.com/2006/04/3-miniatures-2006.html
 
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i like how this subtly cries out, and then gets loud. This oozes with things that i can relate to
 
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