2 poems

[swilow]

SPACES BETWEEN US
Eyes that won't meet
other I's- they shudder
away.

Nystagmus of windows
to avoid the piercing.

Devoid of feeling or
feeling the void?
Between the eyes/I's
Shying to deny
what shines inside

Only pupils dilate~
pressure released from-
into the breach of-
being a stunted ape
Alone on Venus.
Between the stars....



S.D
Hot smoke- hold breath
in the bellows- exhale
A straight-forward
metal to pedal-
Clock woman spins
Hello brother
Oh mother, help me...
Hello sister
And it doesn't occurr
to ask why we fly
They're in the backseat anyway (but I am not piloting this one)
Oh. its a dream- scream awake
the multiverse market
all wares are sold
Be warned- the price is high
Shurnken negro-
And shamaness-
Tubes of neon-
Desert view from
In The Sandstorm
What the fuck??
Shrunken smiles, toothy grin,
Goddess swirls I
presume eternally
WAKE UP!!
WAKE UP!!
What the fuck is going on??
My small room?
Oh yeah.
S.D.​

 

[ShapeShifter77]

these are awesome


love the eyes and 'I's' concept

 

[swilow]

^Thankyou

 

[izzy66]

very interesting as always

 

[lostNfound]

I just fell in love with this line


Devoid of feeling or
feeling the void?

 

[Damien]

I like em both but I can relate much more to the first one.