2:43 a.m.

[Blue and green glowstyx]

We lay
Insanly intertwined
legs, arms, lips
blankets
minds.
Fingers lingered
languidly
eyes searched
soulfully
without any sense of
reality
Whn we thought
we had found it all
in each other
in pill
We had lost the chance
to find anything
more than an
empty
bank account
and a loss
of
words.....

 

[eddi spgeddi]

ouch.
you pricked me.

 

[neverwas]

i fell for this peice...it made my heart skip a few beats then the heartache of reality i really enjoyed reading it.

We lay
Insanly intertwined
legs, arms, lips
blankets
minds.
Fingers lingered
languidly
eyes searched
soulfully
without any sense of
reality
Whn we thought
we had found it all
in each other

 

[E-girl]

this was truly unique and awesome.
2 thumbs up!

 

[Blue and green glowstyx]

thanks for te responses guys.... it's nice to get some feed back.

 

[frostyangel]

Nice work.. I'll be watching for more of your work

 

[Aja909]

:D