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K'dOUTinAZ

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Somewhere between Eden and North Utopia. Somewhere
Angry youth
You are Mr. Elite
But you are older now
Inside your head lives an old scene :(
Mr. Punk
Sad and hating everyone
This excuse is getting old
The way you felt has left you hating yourself :(
Cause now everyone is so confused
You never worked for a cent
Self-destructive and you pay your debt
Cause you miss another time
When all your friends were so divine
Now all of them have gone or changed :(
Do you still live in these angry days?
But when you lost someone you love...
your mask is taken off
Does this life cut you down to life?
Does it open up your eyes?
They have all found their way
As you struggle through your maze
You built these walls of hate

Please don't tell me that it is too late

Wasting your days and nights
Nothing has changed
Nothing is right
You have no sense of pride
Sees no respect in his parent's eyes
And why should they care?
No one cared for you

Alone

You were alone when the trigger was pulled
You were alone when you wrote that note
You were alone when that bullet went through your temple
You were buried alone
Forgotten
Never again to be talked about

Alone


That child inside you rests well tonight
 
it's such bullshit how nobody replies to the good shit. I realize that whatever anyone says isn't going to be better than the shit that was posted but at least give it props and bump it.
 
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Sometimes people miss things with the amount of traffic that goes through. Other times work will touch them but they really don't know how to respond.

Anyway, regarding the work above, it's got a real melancholy sense about it, But I enjoyed reading it just the same.

I could actually see it working as lyrics :)

Well written!
 
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