Post your rhymes, free-form poems, ANYTHING! :)

[Lost Ego]

I wrote this rap a week or so ago. I'm not sure if this forum is okay with rapping, if not just read it like poetry. I had lots of fun writing this and i was goin for a dark atmosphere o.o;


I popz a pill and throw on my frown.
Five oh catch word but they cant slow me down.
If u think drugs are bad then u must be a clown.
Clowns cause me to laugh and ur so funny.
I bet you still believe in the easter bunny.
Ya, he exists, but he carries around a gun, nd...
If you see me dontcha try runnin.
For the bunny its all game and fun and...
Tonight ima pop a pill, throw on my mask and pull out my gunny.
U already know that ima have more fun than ted bundy.
Pullin all out on my wits and cunning --- linguistics.
Took me 5 minutes to butter 2 biscuits.
Think about the idea and it'll make you fidget.
If writing were height i'd be a giant and u a midget
Life ain't a game, u can't relive it.
To step to me it must be a sin, its...
Blasphemy. Most of you couldn't last with me in the ring, for 2 minutes.
Oh yeah and tell ur girl friend to gimme her digits!

 

[RareForm]

i'm not sure about rhyming bunny with gunny, to be honest. did you write this solely for fun or are you trying to pursue a career?

 

[Lost Ego]

Just for fun lol. I used to hang around with a crowd that strictly liked drugs and rapping and stuff, but since i quit i havent really had anyone that i need to impress. But im just doing it for fun and to improve on my rapping skills so if i run into some rappers at a rave again, i dont make a fool of myself trying to freestyle. Whats wrong with taking gun and adding ny as to kinda give it a nickname-esque touch to it??

 

[Lost Ego]

or are you saying i shoulda just taken out the "nd" and then the "nin" and the "and..."? I was actually thinking about doing that but i liked how it flowed when i spoke the lyrics

 

[qwe]

Cann i rap?

arre u black?

 

[Lost Ego]

^ no sir
white as a zebra drawn by a kid with a white crayon

i dont really care for rapping, i just like writing. here's another piece that i wrote some time ago. i'ma put it on my myspace profile so this should be a good place to copy it down from my ipod and to get some input on how epic it is

Came to the world to start an apocalypse, it all started when i felt those super soft lips, drove me mad like a feline for that cat nip, could never get enough like a husuluh for his benjamins, he keeps on hustlin til he's got tha benz and shit, never gettin enough an alchoholic for his sip, a mother to her kid, coke for its drip, a dopefiend another hit, for me its the mother nd her kid, the kids under a vehicle, she lifts it over her head like a miracle, me and her we're real heroes, try takin me on and ur dividin by zero, ridin this thing called life i never steer though, pickin a path, the most reward and the least crusade, life's a bitch and i shoulda stayed, this is all that left of me, i went out with a grenade, hear these bars that i have laid, my bars cut deeper than a blade, question them n i'll have u slain, i got bitches to do it without pay, they'll kill u and pull a kurt cobaine, his face is scarred cuz of the caine, the world is mine but we're still all slaves, i gotta appetite for action, i'm on another plane, got that hunger i can't abstain, i'm trippin so hard that i think im gunna faint and i better end this shit b4 she cums, cuz this beat hits harder than a drum

 

[HigherAwareness]

Fool we ain't no joke in Orlando cherry park,
we smoke crack (not really) and watch animal porn after dark
we don't drink alcohol
we just take adderall

knockin down news paper stands
soda machines and trash cans
throwin rocks at old folks makin pedophile jokes
ridin skate boards
rippin off crack whores

potent like tha black fist
we dont vote for charlie crist
bringin more drama than gorillas in tha mist

steady gettin higher
our mayor is buddy dyer
turnin the city butifael around like a tire (IDK it rhymed)
So tell that honkey to retire
settin elementary schools and public property on fire
gonzo porn.. and pimps at acorn..make our lives much brighta

fool please, you cant see me
my mommas on PCP
more gang bangin goin on than compton in the nineties
my little sister got shot for a nickle bag of weed

 

[HigherAwareness]

You guys better not bitch, I was gonna start this as a new thread in TDS, But I figuered I would not make any friends if I did that soooo yeah woop woop. ouch I just got punched by my roomate, asshole ,he don't know about my musical styles.

 

[HigherAwareness]

It's funnier if you live in florida. Particularly Orange County

 

[HigherAwareness]

Lost Ego wrote " can I rap?"



No

 

[DzNutz]

we dont know if u can rap till u put on a youtube video!!!

ur lyrics are actually ok .. the humour is good but if im being honest its very eminem-esque

 

[Seanjay]

from my blog

Some dead past you reawaken, with faux name lest it’s forsaken. No future we live a lie, reminiscing of nothing till the day we die.

It’s pointless explaining my confusion, when I live my life with great delusion. I sing my song with backup vocals, my book published by soulless locals. My words are spilt across the table, yet to them it’s just a fable; since I speak with a forked tongue, they can’t believe the songs I’ve sung.

DJs spinning beats with an air of idealism, the worshippers are dancing to the sound of socialism. With the DJ as their God and the music as their Bible, they run around in circles turning into something tribal.


In my world you reign supreme, a stern but loving pixie queen. With faeries dust you coat the city, not once ever taking pity, on the hopeless viral inhabitants, in a town of no real relevance.

Well that’s me, never giving enough to reach my goals but I can go through my sorrows with a fine toothed comb.


meh

 

[Lost Ego]

we dont know if u can rap till u put on a youtube video!!!

ur lyrics are actually ok .. the humour is good but if im being honest its very eminem-esque

forreal?!! thanks. that dude is like my idol & favorite rapper. quite the inspiration... i guess i'll find a mic and record something to a beat and if it sounds good i'll cast it on youtube, but it prolly won't sound great, but who knows, i've never said whats written b4.

seanjay, i liked ur shit, post some more? it was deep and it flowed

higherawareness, hate to be a critic but try again. i know u can do better

the 2nd is sloppy, sorry for that.
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sins of a righteous man
shorten his life span
sittin on the can
listenin to wayne
fuck money i wanna win my game
bitches, knowledge, power
did that, aight now make it rain
ended a man, never been the same
defended a man, nothin change
do good and get the short stick
do wrong and get 3 on ur dick
hows that shit work
when we gotta go to work
all day im overworked
life is a blur, ima lurk
baby maker ima stork
aint a daddy ima jerk
u do gooders make me puke
inspire me to engineer a nuke
blow this place to shit
and if this computer live
the stone-agers will read what i writ
they'll hafta buy a knit kit
make a hanky to wipe the tear from their eye
cause this was the very first rap to fly
make it to the moon and to never lie
n these lyrics, they get u high



i sting like bitch, i'm lighter than a feather
annoy me like an itch and i'll light you up, i aint no mc esher
the perfect girl is in my dreams but i never met her,
she wants outa my dreams but i aint gonna let her
no bitch is perfect, it took 3 to knit me a sweater,
ugly bitch you cant have my number, i'll give u a letter
a big D and if you dont got 2 D's, dont step to me
you gettin mad, this aint no talk shit
this is get down on ur knees and lemme pretend it aint u shit
murdered some nig named awareness, i dare you not to bare witness,
we both know i dont gotta talk you outa it, i got the richness,
if you dont got a price you'll get an incurable sickness
you dont want that and we both know that ay,
so take what you can get and amscray


i wanna spit the first one to this beat but i dont have a mic. i think i sounded good, but im the only audiencee

 

[HigherAwareness]

forreal?!! thanks. that dude is like my idol & favorite rapper. quite the inspiration... i guess i'll find a mic and record something to a beat and if it sounds good i'll cast it on youtube, but it prolly won't sound great, but who knows, i've never said whats written b4.

seanjay, i liked ur shit, post some more? it was deep and it flowed

higherawareness, hate to be a critic but try again. i know u can do better

OMG don't tempt me....This will take awhile won't be spontaneous I will have to break out my pen and paper.

 

[BEEF/N/BROKLY]

Ma nigga u wack
ya pills filled wit crack
mdma dealers startin to slack
cut it wit black
yea da pcp,
high as hell like smokin
beef n brokly
u can not fuckin mock me
ma hook u cudnt block g
not tryin b cocky
but i hit like fuckin rocky
block better too
on ma hitler tip
gonna take out da jews

 

[BEEF/N/BROKLY]

blue light fight
bet imma win
pop off son
all i do is sin
in n out da looney bin
dey try n call me crazy
dey try n to persuaes me
to take dem fuckin pills
n i keeps it fuckin reals
kno only god heals
yet im skippin on dem meals
n hustlin dem deals
holdin down wit da steal
so take ya least meal
if u a bitch den kneel
maybe den ill feel remorse
if not u a fuckin corpse

 

[HigherAwareness]

O ok you want me to get gangsta? My rhyme was intended to be silly but I am not dettered by this. Ill be back man Ill be back.

 

[Lost Ego]

i getz that paper
smoke that yaper
i aint her daddy
but i damn sure made her
slippin down the slopes
ima fuck this world
and i cant be coaxed
im the nigga with the most
first one ever to get this close
more enlightened than budah
got bitches n im their tutor
she gimme green n i show it to her
she gimme pink, i letter ride in the 2door
she gimme excuses i slap that hoe
tell me when to stop, i already go
thizz face all night, u already know
this shit go dumber than 0 times 4
fuck u haters, im rotten to the core
i'll hijack google and crash this server
to the whitehouse and no further
jokes outa him like frank furter
haha like a blowjob trifecta
feds n judge so big, straight through obama's neck uhh (like e40 does)
ur ears ringin from all this oral sex blood
ur eyes bleedin from readin this rhyme
cause its 4 ur ears and it'll strike u blind
fuck ur brain, fuck u in the behind
cant believe it was written by i
this shit is wet, its white on rye
fuck that its rice on white
its the zebra without the stripes
darwinism on this animal shit
give u a canablism fit
eatin who said this is what it wasnt
a lesson was learned
never doubt me, never push my buttons

 

[Seanjay]

Meeep.

They bind us, by all this shit that doesn't define us,

laws in place that constrict thought and try to confine us

the story of a guy whose choices get taken out of context, they hex he gets vexed and then he writes text on the walls,

tells the story of it all, about his life his pain and strife with a knife self defense against his crazy wife,

and the same blade he used to slice her fine, was the same blade he used to cut his lines

but he's willing to pay the price for paradise a baggie of fine white crystal ice that'll definitely get him nice

and what about tomorrow? That isn't a thought when crashing has him in sorrow.

And he progresses to the needle, that quick rush, instant blush speaking rapid mush.

One you start to inject, when you're sick it's impossible to reject from a so called friend a rig full of gear.

Now everyday he lives his life in fear, knowing that the end is near.

 

[BEEF/N/BROKLY]

O ok you want me to get gangsta? My rhyme was intended to be silly but I am not dettered by this. Ill be back man Ill be back.

LMAO u hood as hell ma g, dat reply had me dyin u funny ma dude, i was just dusted typin na mean on some quick ish, bout to roll up da hot shit ma nigga no beef no beeefff hahaha bre u dun wan it beefff nigga beef n brokly u cannot mock me