Famished Society

[geometricide]

I wroted some poems over the past coupla years so I've decided to sharing them

Famished Society

Strange the way my mind bathes these days
tuned frequently to back words, no escaping the caves
Befuddling mumbles tenaciously crumbled
insatiable walls of some gluttonous graves.

INSANE to show pain, she is weak without age
skeptics claimed without shame, she will soon find her cage
its mundane tilling soil daily moistened with rage.

Can man tame beasts surviving on sanguinary rain?
Amputate feral instincts, replace nature's game?
Make them quiver and tumble, slain souls rise to man's fame.

Back to black, smart means square in celebrity style
meet your match, solitarily climb culture's dial
I was scared when unique began redefining me
only to collide with the popular bile.

NOBODY is wise without casual lies
the bizarre, sharing rarities and their disguise
to distract popularity's tongue from new flies
the conformers secede, old gods fall to strange knees
to see the new gods who display ugly fleas.

 

[RareForm]

NOBODY is wise without casual lies
the bizarre, sharing rarities and their disguise
to distract popularity's tongue from new flies

this part particularly stuck out to me. well, the phrasing throughout the whole thing was mentionable. i dunno, you're a good writer.

 

[lostNfound]

You certainly have a knack for the vernacular.

Hope you post some more of your work, I enjoyed it.

 

[geometricide]

thank you!! i definitely will post more, i have some more that i did, i am in the middle of moving stuff into my new home and i have to dig them up lol

THANKS AGAIN