Rambles

[artndrugsplz]

Rambles

If I look and see something great
Marvelous, glorious,
Yet you see nothing
Bland, droll
It’s just an object, but I see a wonderful piece of art,
Then am I crazy for seeing what you don’t,
Or are you crazy for seeing nothing out of the ordinary,
If only I could give you my eyes
If only for a day,
For those 24 hours with this vision is better then nothing,
However once I turn you on, will you revert,
Or will you see what I see,
These are my thoughts when I sit here with you,
Yet you will truly know nothing,
Just like I know nothing​

Let me know what you think, and any constructive criticism is welcomed.

 

[New]

Life is circular, just like the thoughts.

 

[Mehm]

are you talking about an impactful drug hallucination? My critique would be that the concrete nature of this piece is both its strength and weakness. thanks for posting

 

[lostNfound]

the way we all don't see the world more often than not.

a few truths i've thought of often times.

 

[artndrugsplz]

the way we all don't see the world more often than not.

a few truths i've thought of often times.

Yes this is correct, and yea everything comes back around full circle

I was inspired by a drug hallucination, but really it's describing different states of mind;

for example someone who is happy see's color in the world, whereas on the opposite end someone who is depressed see's gray everywhere.