Valleys

[FixXxer]

Valleys--

in the valley low,
is where i will go,
my friends and i show,
how friendship grows.

in the valley tree,
is where i will be,
individually,
in my acid sea.

on the valley seat,
is where we will again meet,
speak and defeat,
all barriers beneath.

by the valley rocks,
time is only clocks,
work, play, and long walks,
around these city blocks.

in these valleys again,
last times before we're men,
next to the rock den,
for more than ten.

the fire burns down,
cannot keep a frown,
you guys will leave town,
you know i, am here to be found.

 

[frostyangel]

I give you props.. I cannot rythme and make it work for shit...

Good job!!

 

[FixXxer]

really? i find it pretty easy to do.
if you want i can try to teach you how.

 

[Dazed Zeppelin]

I like it. I want to talk to you about it

 

[RareForm]

this one is really good, good job, FixXxer

 

[cherub]

*pat head* hehe

no seriously this is great work i am not at all capable of rymthing either but i love to read it when people can!

 

[FixXxer]

*pat head* hehe

no seriously this is great work i am not at all capable of rymthing either but i love to read it when people can!

rob schnieder says you can do it!