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Game Rap Battle - spit your hardest bars!!

nuttynutskin said:
Lol you're not the one I was responding to but ok...

You don't mean to be the referee
Cuz you probably can't even see
From all the pot that you're smokin
You're just wishin hopin and provokin

They want your head in a lead case?
That don't even make sense you're a disgrace
You can't keep up with my flow that's like runnin a race
So you just go nowhere or maybe just jog in place

With your rhymes you got no inertia
Unlike mine when they come to hurtcha
You're talkin about gettin higher
While I'm takin teeth out with pliers

The only suppliers you got are deniers
Of lyrical grace I'm on fire
You already need a rest cuz you look tired
The timeline of your rap has basically expired
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I can't see you / you wont see the pair of my hands
when I catch you in 3d/ like a stereogram
its not the pot im smokin / we aint face to face
how I spose to see you / we aint in the same place
for the record a lead case/ is for poison material
Id say go ask your boys/ you'd prolly catch a venerial
Im uncomparable with flows / your hysterical like hoe's
grab that pair of pliers / tear your ears into a bow
yea the tears are gunna flow / do we go burial or pyre
only query left to know / til you lyrically retired

screw it straight into the soundcard one take at just above speech level it goes

I think it was @daturetard you were swinging but im pitchin in whenever .... he should respond maybe, hoefully. Start up the vocal thing whenever! I think @SoCalShordie left a beat to use, we should use that. (Like I just didnt lol)
 
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The Comedy of Errors clears the stage,
Verona's Two Brave Gentlemen engage.
The Merry Wives of Windsor laugh with glee,
While Measure for a Measure sets us free.
Much Ado About Nothing fills the room,
And Love's lost Labour leaves a bitter gloom.
A Midsummer Night's Dream is sweet and deep,
The Merchant of great Venice cannot sleep.
As You Like It, we take the greenwood track,
The Taming of the Shrew will hold us back.
All's Well That Ends Well in the passing year,
On charming Twelfth Night when the stars appear.
A Winter's Tale brings sadness to the shore,
The Tempest rages, breaking down the door.
King John is crowned, though trouble stains his name,
Then Richard second dies to end his game.
First Henry fourth rules o'er a broken state,
Part two of Henry fourth decides his fate.
Great Henry fifth will lead his men to fight,
While Henry sixth part one defends the right.
Part two of Henry sixth reveals the flaw,
Part three of Henry sixth destroys the law.
Foul Richard third schemes hard to seize the crown,
And Henry eighth will tear the altars down.

Now Troilus and Cressida face the war,
Coriolanus bleeds at every pore.
While Titus Andronicus seeks revenge,
And Romeo and Juliet must weep.
Sad Timon out of Athens walks alone,
While Julius Caesar falls upon the stone.
Macbeth will see the woods of Birnam rise,
Young Hamlet hears his father's ghostly cries.
Old King Lear screams against the raging storm,
Othello's jealous heart grows far too warm.
Mark Antony and Cleopatra fall,
While Cymbeline defends his castle wall.
See Pericles amidst the stormy sea,
Two Noble Kinsmen fight for victory.

-Williwas Shookspered

But crude but is in iambic pentameter.

Musical accompaniment would typically be Lutes and Viols, Trumpets and Drums & Recorders, Shawms and Cornets BUT a total of only 4 of 5 musicians was usual i.e. all had to be multi-instrumentalists and of course, no amplification.
 
^That is way too many bars -- plus unless you willwas Shooks...oh lol I get it haha. Iambic pentameter is worth something but I dont think half of us rappers could tell ya what it was..... in fact I had a cocky ass friend that is working as an undergrad as an english prof who asked me --- uhh pentameter, something to do with 5 syllables I'd guess? Iambic...dont know that one but im guessing a measure of time of some sort....

10 syllables, close enough, two 5's lol ---shookespered is taught too much and now I have a strong tendency to go couplets when triplets lend more to rap....anywho
 
Iambic pentameter is just ten syllables per line, structured as five pairs of alternating unstressed and stressed beats that sound like da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM.

Sorry, I honestly assumed EVERYONE had the bard's work spoil their childhoods.

I think the instrumentation is the more interesting part. It's live and acoustic often with a musician playing a drum (or even multiple drums) with their feet while they play a string or woodwind instrument.

Most audience members were 'penny groundlings' (which I hope you can figure out) and while an unskilled worker might only earn sixpence per day, I think it arguable that it's got more rather than less expensive. Also they simply hadn't even imagined concessions so within the yard (wherin the groundlings dwelt) there were people wandering around selling fool, alcohol, tobacco and indeed ANYTHING portable that could be bought and sold. Bizarre.

'How was the play?'
'Look - I bought a pig!'
 
alternating stressed and unstressed -- thank you for that. My powers only grow as the thread ages.... (All couplets all the way down in that one too, damn guy!)
 
nuttynutskin said:
The only thing itchin
Is your jock strap when you're bitchin
My rhymes will leave you twitchin
When they beat you into submission
You didn't need a vasectomy
Cuz you sound like your brain's already had 3
And you can't even rap coherently
When the truth is just plain to see
You're givin meth to kids
While I sew together your eyelids
And hit you with lyrical violence
That'll maybe knock into you some common sense
The only thing tranquilized
Is your mind when you realize
How much you're fkn despised
Even by a bunch of dumb young guys
Only thing you're ridin in is a hearse
Cuz your verses just keep getting worse
And I don't even have to curse
While you look like you need a nurse
You went through withdrawals cuz you're lyrics are lackin
While my verses are trackin and mackin
Helping me bring in this paper I'm stackin
On your career all you're doin is slackin
The only seed that you placin
Is contempt from the audience disgracin
While I flow like a car that's racin
And you're just awkwardly pacin and bracin
From the impact of my supersonic rhyme
I'd try to explain to you but I ain't got time
The timeline I refine is like fine wine
While your bars are more like a heinous crime

EEEEEE :LOL:
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Yeah, my rap was straight up bragging bout ma felonies
Junkie talkin shit, bruh shut yo mouth, boy im like fella please
You still pop the pills, im stackin up bruh, i jus sell the beans
I be makin money while you rackin up the jealousy
Fronted bro my shit to move im pressed he wasnt sellin these
Shit my lawyer got me free, whike yours be winnin seldomly
Fore I caught the case, shit i was happy thas complacency
You cant bum a hit off my zaza, bitch im lacin these
 
notsmokeymcpot42088 said:
^ You in for the battle/cypher ? Lol that would make 3 -- recruitment for this is tougher than anticipated.
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Shiiit, I mean, hit me with a DM and ill get you an email that im actually active on. Just checked here today for the first time in maybe 6 months? Probably less but it felt long as hell
 
Dead or alive

Who cares?

The brain explodes anyway

Who cares?

When neurons burst away

Running from bullets



A neuron wants to fire

A synapse

The gun fires back

The shot

Who cares?

When there’s blood on the floor



My head, outside the body

It thinks slowly, heavily

It says

What the fuck is this shit?

Seconds left

Life fades
 
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@Zopiclone bandit

The rap you were after the other day (I think mistakenly thought it was "lost weekend"):
4DQSAR said:
The Comedy of Errors clears the stage,
Verona's Two Brave Gentlemen engage.
The Merry Wives of Windsor laugh with glee,
While Measure for a Measure sets us free.
Much Ado About Nothing fills the room,
And Love's lost Labour leaves a bitter gloom.
A Midsummer Night's Dream is sweet and deep,
The Merchant of great Venice cannot sleep.
As You Like It, we take the greenwood track,
The Taming of the Shrew will hold us back.
All's Well That Ends Well in the passing year,
On charming Twelfth Night when the stars appear.
A Winter's Tale brings sadness to the shore,
The Tempest rages, breaking down the door.
King John is crowned, though trouble stains his name,
Then Richard second dies to end his game.
First Henry fourth rules o'er a broken state,
Part two of Henry fourth decides his fate.
Great Henry fifth will lead his men to fight,
While Henry sixth part one defends the right.
Part two of Henry sixth reveals the flaw,
Part three of Henry sixth destroys the law.
Foul Richard third schemes hard to seize the crown,
And Henry eighth will tear the altars down.

Now Troilus and Cressida face the war,
Coriolanus bleeds at every pore.
While Titus Andronicus seeks revenge,
And Romeo and Juliet must weep.
Sad Timon out of Athens walks alone,
While Julius Caesar falls upon the stone.
Macbeth will see the woods of Birnam rise,
Young Hamlet hears his father's ghostly cries.
Old King Lear screams against the raging storm,
Othello's jealous heart grows far too warm.
Mark Antony and Cleopatra fall,
While Cymbeline defends his castle wall.
See Pericles amidst the stormy sea,
Two Noble Kinsmen fight for victory.

-Williwas Shookspered

But crude but is in iambic pentameter.

Musical accompaniment would typically be Lutes and Viols, Trumpets and Drums & Recorders, Shawms and Cornets BUT a total of only 4 of 5 musicians was usual i.e. all had to be multi-instrumentalists and of course, no amplification.
Click to expand...
 
oh shit i didnt read it i just saw it was all couplets and than the monicker made me think it was just some shakespeare that is funny.

sorry for the lack of credit where due @4DQSAR ! Good shit, I got a chuckle and my shakespearian knowledge is fairly limited
 
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