Game Haiku Train!

[streaM Freak]

Peaceful emptiness
I'm shining light on my void
Correct connection

 

[unodelacosa]

Correct connection
I pretend I can forget
And wish for the snow

 

[streaM Freak]

And wish for the snow
How do we manifest that?
Start taking action

 

[00intherain]

Start taking action
Though inertia might creep up
Just keep up the fight

 

[streaM Freak]

Just keep up the fight
The people have the power
Build my hovercraft

 

[streaM Freak]

Build my hovercraft
Or entangle Bojangles
Either will suffice

 

[unodelacosa]

Either will suffice
Fried chicken quantum physics
Hovercrafting life

 

[unodelacosa]

Hovercrafting life
The Devil left a voicemail:
"Palisades ablaze”

 

[Cheshire_Kat]

Hovercrafting life
Then Satan left a voicemail:
"Palisades ablaze”

LOL

Why would Satan burn down L.A. ?

It's practically his "Temple on Earth"

 

[unodelacosa]

his "Temple on Earth"
LA’s The City Of Angels
You can’t write Haiku?

 

[Cheshire_Kat]

his "Temple on Earth"
LA’s The City Of Angels
You can’t write Haiku?

Oh you bet I Can
But it is very funny
Can't we comment too?

Irony not included...

 

[unodelacosa]

Can’t we comment too?
Please: do that voodoo you do
True coo-coo-ca-choo

 

[Deleted member 567457]

True coo-coo-ca-choo
Voodoo Queen fallin' for you
And now you are trapped!

 

[kiely]

And now you are trapped!
I don't want to be.
So how do I learn Haiku ?


I mean ....


And now you are trapped!
Stuck in this poetic poo
Learning to Haiku ?

 

[kiely]

Learning to Haiku ?
Do you have to ride on trains
When you write Haiku ?

 

[unodelacosa]

When you write Haiku
“King, are you glad you are king?”
Demons are chanting

 

[kiely]

Demons are chanting
As the train goes screaming through
What is a Haiku ?

 

[jasperkent]

What is a Haiku?
Five syllables, then seven,
Then five more again.

 

[unodelacosa]

Then five more again.
When ten men jive or condemn
Still life for more zen.

 

[jasperkent]

Still life for more zen:
Cup of tea and bowl of rice.
All needs are met. Bliss!