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wake up

FixXxer

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Wake up and smell the coffee,
taste the greatness of English Toffee,
It's time for work, so stay awake,
Open yours eyes, life is no longer fake.

Time to see the truth,
how each person finishes their youth,
begins life, at a different definition,
viewing life from a whole new position.

Now listen...
Childhood was lots of fun you'll be missin',
now you must work for what you receive,
things are no longer make believe,
life's new deception deceived.
Take some time to breathe.

Whatever you give to this Earth,
(the one your seed was planted on since birth)
you will always receive the same amount,
that you give, whether you bother or not to count.
It's not about your bank account, your intent is paramount.

Have faith in yourself, you are the ruler,
of your mind, body, and spirit, you're cooler.
You can achieve anything with enough efforts,
Keep at it, no matter how hard, even if in deft spurts.

Now time to wake up and see the world.
Lots of hard work, and obstacles hurled.
People ignored and people adored,
An endless battle of struggle and hope,
Always climbing, or barely holding the rope.

Smell the coffee, and be prepared.
Life is hard, no need to be scared.
The start is the often hardest part,
but it's always the one remembered most by the heart.

Bedtime is long in the distance, miles from here.
No matter what is thrown at you, remember your gear,
your family and friends, the ones there first,
they've loved you through it all, the good and the worst.

Childhood ends tonight, go without a fight.
Just prepare for challenges in the future,
always learn and keep your intents pure.
End this without harm, sound the alarm.

WAKE UP.
 
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Lovely darlin, seriously this touched me, i see you excepting you are moving on into the world of life,

written well it made me think of ending of times of my life but definately a pleasant memories )

Thank you for your mind kiddo
much luv to you!
 
thanx cherub.. you are bang on with our expectation :)
pleasent memories indeed.,.. those are the ones that matter most :)
 
i liked this cos like punktuality said its positive

positivity is a good thing.

wOOt job buddy :)
 
yeah, i tend to try to keep positive nowadays.. i see no reason for sadness anymore.. i jus think there's alot more ppl out there who have it worse than i do...

btw... this is easily my new favourite peice of work.. =D
 
I love poems that rhyme intuitively. like this one. I'll read it again sometime, I enjoyed it the first time and know it will only get better.
 
I really enjoyed this piece, buddy. Quite optimistic and uplifting! References to childhood always remind me of better days and times when things were so much easier!
Kudos!
 
This is definitely quite inspirational, i love your style man...thanks for sharing...

Btw: the title made me think of "Mad Season" :D
 
i just re-read this peice.. love it as much as ever.. thank you all again for the comments.. hopefully i can get a new idea or 2 tro post sometime soon
 
^dude, you are sorely missed seriously. drop me a message sometime man. :D
 
Nice.
I loved this part;
now time to wake up and see the world,
lots of hard work, and obstacles hurled,
people ignored and people adored,
and endless battle of struggle and hope,
always climbing, barely on the rope.
 
Grammar and spelling is a suckers game 😁
Looking forward to read more from you!
lol, i agree... except when it means the differance between something like "your shit" and "you're shit"

This one is over 15 years old lol.. i just posted a new one today, if you really mean that.
and thank you, i appreciate it
 
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