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The Lake of Lessons.

FixXxer

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Niagara Falls.
developing a goal, like it's something you stole,
moving fast to achieve, what you asked to receive.
believe

work hard. office or yard.
don't matter your skill, effort will be rewarded still,
experience is gained, where confidence once reigned.
if this is true, you can do. anything you need to.

retire on fire. down to the wire.
high in the sky, til you cant fly.
you're still awake, under this lake.

water of speed, moving to breed.
animals free of sin, surviving off of their kin.
humans of steel, living for what they feel.
yet are unsure of what is real

lake spreads to the ocean, constantly in motion,
meaning separate quotients.
dividing this water, as it gets hotter,
life strives off of slaughter.
but we think its wrong.
so we build a dam of our own song

lake so enraged, keeping itself encaged.
releases its' wrath, when the land needs a bath,
thunder and lightning, fighting to teach us a lesson,
every drop of its' flesh, is always a blessin'.

reach out to us, great lake of hope,
show us, why not to mope.
teach us the fashion,
of your eternal passion.
you make life everlastin
 
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First I like the metaphor used in this,, great imagery put with it made for a great piece kiddo..... Great work ! :) :)

~Hugs~
 
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