second chance

[FixXxer]

a crack at success,
i made a big mess,
i no longer undress,
leave that for the best

a chance without flaw,
instead a broken jaw,
a sharpened red claw,
tears me raw.

a time with no mistake,
justs seems to be fake,
like living under a lake,
or not eating birthday cake.

a need for error,
actually prevents terror,
keeping just, we bare her,
as perfection becomes rarer.

one more chance,
for the perfect dance,
do i take the "i cants"
or use this deadly lance?

second tries,
are what keeps me alive,
from these i strive,
to keep sane, my beehive.

 

[beanpoophead]

a crack at success,
i made a big mess,
i no longer undress,
leave that for the best

a need for error,
actually prevents terror,
keeping just, we bare her,
as perfection becomes rarer.

one more chance,
for the perfect dance,
do i take the "i cants"
or use this deadly lance?

i like those three bits alot! especially i no longer undress, leave that for the best and a need for error, actually prevents terror. i like that it rhymes too, im not a rhymer and so i like reading rhyming poems :D

 

[FixXxer]

:D lol, ryhming is all i know.