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FixXxer

FixXxer

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Thoughts mean different things
Ideas are theories that spread their wings
Theories are concepts treated like kings

Concepts are understanding what is and can be
Understanding is accepting what you may never see
Accepting is knowing that knowledge is free

Knowing is belief we are all one
Belief is faith life is never done
Faith is hope that bright light has shun
Hope is trust in someone
 
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well wicked FixXxer.

not that it matters just the one spelling bizzo, first line on "different."
therefore... at least i know its not a paste.

the chronology (!) i mean the development of the theme of the bizzo loses it when you go a little outta sink...

thoughts...
ideas...
concepts...
and then ideas again.
can you find a synonym for ideas and replace it in lines 3 and 4?

hope i'm not seen as rude or harsh, just trying...as always... to offer more than just a "good stuff," k?
 
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yeah, i realized after i finished, i meant for it to be concepts, but i dint feel like changin it. lol

tAKE it as a typo... im changin it
 
E-girl said:
My thoughts exactly.
If you don't have hope or trust, what have you got?
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That is for each person to decide for themselves.
But I'm happy you agree. <3

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FixXxer said:
yeah, i realized after i finished, i meant for it to be concepts, but i dint feel like changin it. lol

tAKE it as a typo... im changin it
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I finally actually fixed it lol... This is my oldest poem I can find on this site
 
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