Zone

[-|Twiztd|-]

Your ruthless, relentless
manner is breaking me down.
I never knew one could be as brutal.

What do you gain from my wounds?
Do these tears give you the satisfaction
and happiness that you have been searching
for?

I want to bleed myself dry of you.
Rinse you from my mind.
I want to slip back into the zone
that kept me oblivious to your
hatred.
Numb to your senseless anger.
Back into the far reaches of my
imaginary hues and lands unnamed.
Back into my zone.

I've been so far from my solace...
I'm not sure I can return without having
an emotional withdrawl.
And once again, you wordlessly show me
how truly weak, stupid, and pathetic I am.

What have you gained from my wounds?
Do these tears give you the sweet satisfaction
and happiness you have been searching for?

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

What have you gained from my wounds?
Do these tears give you the sweet satisfaction
and happiness you have been searching for?

very interesting concept.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

^^I agree. nice

 

[RareForm]

Good poem....I liked this piece....

 

[cherub]

Great work,,,,,, raw and sometimes nothing can be better then raw words of "truth"