swilow
Bluelight Crew
The Twilight- Live the Subliminal
Very interesting intro- I really liked the phasery noise panned left. Some very nice FMy squeals and bubbling sounds, plus I really like the weird, sheer texturednoise thingy that squairts all over the place. If you know what I mean.
The melody is okay, but as the song progresses a few frequencies are getting mixed up. You've seperated the sounds well, in terms of stereo positioning, but the melody and some of the more rhymic sounds are clashing, mainly in the high frequencies.
I like the boom with the crash/china cymbal sound, though I would get rid of that cymbal after a while as it inteferes with the beat, particularly overriding the snare. I'm not sure if its just my ears, but the main beat seems panned to the right- this sounds good for a while, but when the song fully kicks in maybe you should move it center, to emphasise it. I also think the hihat sound is too long and crunchy sounding- sounds like a 909closedhat with long decay. Maybe add some sort of accents, velocity changes to the hat to give it movement, or use a differnt, brighter sample. I would also vary the kick drum beat a bit.
The overall song sounds nice, it flows well and is interesting, with all the different sounds and positiong throuhg the mix. It loses itself a bit towards the end; perhaps a longer break in the middle with some more of the intro FX thrown in could help.
Cool tune, though I do like your other ones more. I'll post reviews of them shortly.
Very interesting intro- I really liked the phasery noise panned left. Some very nice FMy squeals and bubbling sounds, plus I really like the weird, sheer texturednoise thingy that squairts all over the place. If you know what I mean.

The melody is okay, but as the song progresses a few frequencies are getting mixed up. You've seperated the sounds well, in terms of stereo positioning, but the melody and some of the more rhymic sounds are clashing, mainly in the high frequencies.
I like the boom with the crash/china cymbal sound, though I would get rid of that cymbal after a while as it inteferes with the beat, particularly overriding the snare. I'm not sure if its just my ears, but the main beat seems panned to the right- this sounds good for a while, but when the song fully kicks in maybe you should move it center, to emphasise it. I also think the hihat sound is too long and crunchy sounding- sounds like a 909closedhat with long decay. Maybe add some sort of accents, velocity changes to the hat to give it movement, or use a differnt, brighter sample. I would also vary the kick drum beat a bit.
The overall song sounds nice, it flows well and is interesting, with all the different sounds and positiong throuhg the mix. It loses itself a bit towards the end; perhaps a longer break in the middle with some more of the intro FX thrown in could help.
Cool tune, though I do like your other ones more. I'll post reviews of them shortly.