you!!

[kasperBoy]

i'm really drunk now.. and just wrote this. what ya think??
Where's up?
Is that down?
Spinning
I'm spinning
I'm floating
My head
Is upside down
Or maybe my brain
Is falling
From my shell
Always held so tightly
But loose
The screws are loose
The bolts are no
Longer right
But tight
Are my arms
For once
My mind focused
My brain clear
Tunnel vision
Is widened
My eyes
Open
My eyes
Once closed
Saw the dead
Of the shadows
Saw the figures
Of the dark
Saw the arches of my eyes
Through the mirrored
Walls
My eyes
Open
My brain
Clear
Sighing
I'm breathing
I'm aching
I'm seeing
For once
My eyes
Open
See the white light
Through the arched
Tunnel
Past the wetness
And across the bridge
Stopping
Catching my breathe
You.

 

[lilygirl]

=) i like it, proves they don't call drugs "mood altering" for nothing.
really though, very rhythmic and trippy
-lil

 

[TriXieee]

I like it! It just flows nicely....kinda like you just wrote out whatever words came to yur mind next.

 

[goodnitestar]

nice, kaspa, very nice, i really like the ending, writting when i am drunk is usually hard to read, good idea to post online, hehe

 

[KaNdEbUtTaHfLy]

kasper. you rawk.