you lost your phone I lost my mind

[Tech as heck]

You said you lost your phone
I lost my mind
I wondered and pondered why you couldn’t possibly find the time
I thought about the things you might say after you disconnect the line
I don’t want to cave
don’t want to make you my slave
don’t want you to change
don’t care if you shave
Just give me a thought
Just pick up your phone for 2 minutes please
That’s not too much to ask to put my mind at ease
The day that you initiate is the day that I anticipate
The more space for you in my mind that I have begun to spare
The Less it seems that you even care
Get off the floor
Answer the fucking door
Before I’m gone and I’m not here for you anymore
Is it me? Am I too demanding ?
I don’t know what to think
You just remain standing
You said you lost your keys
I just want the truth PLEASE !
Maybe you just don’t want to drive
Maybe you’re just fine knowing that Im alive

 

[ashaman]

i like the colloqiualness of this poem and congrats for the rhyming, i absolutely love rhyming poems. its a lot more difficult to write a poem that rhymes and make it make sense than otherwise

Nice

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

the first couple lines of this actually got me.
i placed my self being in narrartive,
then as spoken about.
Both ways, I've been there.
I liked this.

 

[Tech as heck]

hey thanks alot ! this certainly isnt my best or anything. I almost find rhyming most easy. I dont know, It kind of helps me write it.