you knew all along

[Deleted member 10878]

This is a song I wrote... still just lyrics, eventually I'll put to music.



I’m breaking away
Thinking about talking, screaming,
Never you mind all this useless dreaming.
When I pick the time to sing my song,
You’ll know who I’ve been all along.

Today the devil’s been calling my cellular phone,
But I can’t stand the sound of that dialing tone,
So for now I’ll stick to pen and paper,
We’ll see what transpires a little later.

Come meet me at the turnpike at a quarter to 10,
So we can see what useless state we’re in,
We’ll spend the day soaked in coffee and gin,
And swear that we’re not living in sin.

And so I’m breaking away
Thinking about talking, screaming,
Never you mind all this useless dreaming.
When I pick the time to sing my song,
You’ll know who I’ve been all along.

Temptation is around, it’s in the wind,
So today would be fruitful to find a friend.
You can sit around and tell some lies,
We never talk truth, no matter how hard we tries…

I’m breaking away
Thinking about talking, screaming,
Never you mind all this useless dreaming.
When I pick the time to sing my song,
You’ll know who I’ve been all along.

 

[madmick19]

*hugs*

 

[lil angel15]

Beautiful.

I would love to hear this when it's put to music.

 

[wakinglyfe]

You don't have to rhyme lies with tries, try would be a little less awkward, in my opinion of course.

 

[New]

A soothing read with some decent flow.

 

[Evacuate Soul]

Come meet me at the turnpike at a quarter to 10,
So we can see what useless state we’re in,
We’ll spend the day soaked in coffee and gin,
And swear that we’re not living in sin.


I love this section. I feel like I've been here before. Amazing write my friend.