you gave me words

[vurtomatic]

you gave me words
(your heart, your self)
voices in the dark
that surrounded, engulfed
pain and hurt, loss and death

i held your words
(within, silent)
in fear of myself
helpless, inadequate
sorrysorrysorry

you gave me words
(your tears, your cry)
as you laid in the dark
on a bed of death
accompanied, alone

i cradled your words
(close, too close)
into the empty they went
i wished, i prayed
nothing came

you gave me words
(your fears, your despair)
echoes in the dark
ripples of my heart
awakening

 

[grey kat]

nice! very nice!

 

[katmeow]

AH, great stuff vurt!

 

[neverwas]

vurt hun u know how i feel bout u and u know how i feel bout ur writting

this peice was toughing and sad...i empathised with it in many ways...