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[fathom76]

Add a couple of lines to these, let's see where it goes. Be GOOD (as in manners), creative, and in keep with the tone if you will.
Fiery skies of crimson and gold
Are felt through the thoughts of wonders told,
Blueless oceans cause tears of sorrow
In those who's truth is in their marrow.
Starfilled nights set in the blackened sky
Force thinkers to fill with mystify...
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"Each new hour holds new chances for new beginnings, the Horizon leans forward offering space to place new steps of change"-Maya Angelou
[This message has been edited by fathom76 (edited 09 August 2001).]

 

[Cowgirl24]

...And as worlds spin, to hesitate
And feel their own breath resonate.
Not sure if this verse fits...feel free to tell me to get rid of it

They stand as much time as they must
To fill sad hearts with joy and trust,
Through tearful eyes let sorrow wane
To colour waters blue again.
[This message has been edited by Cowgirl24 (edited 09 August 2001).]

 

[vocab]

Sweep the sun from window panes
a broom of hearts whose ends are frayed
a sound expounds in static heaps
a music lost, a love that leaps
A open question, a beak of gold
a fine incision, lights the soul

 

[Maui2k]

shine down on me
your loves warmth is ecstacy
I cant believe my reprieve
is taking away all my grief
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~Maui2k http://www.mp3.com/maui2k
Aim: PeerBoy

 

[Robdob]

Orion's eye beams your reply,
A response that only true divinity could justify
And with heads tilted back
knowledge spills into rivers, deltas form
nobles begin to swarm,
but in the middle is I...