you above and me below

[beanpoophead]

haven't be able to write much later, i dont know... it just won't come like it used too. i miss my words so much. anyways,



I felt you breath above me
i guess you didn’t realize
how long its been since someone
held me, like that, in that moment
i didn’t want to be caught up in it
didn’t want you to see me
close my eyes but still watch the movie
see the people on the screen
behind my eyelids, shut so tight
so that our scene wouldn’t end
not quite, not that night

I felt myself breath beneath you
each exhalation brought inhalation
and for some reason i felt like you
could care about me
more than just this moment
and I’m probably wrong
I usually am about these things
But there we lay
arms around each other
and i held the world for that moment
i kept them all away

breathing together
together breathing
you above and me below

 

[RareForm]

that was wonderful! well, you succeeded in capturing the moment quite well.

Beautiful write dear.

~RF

 

[hearshot-kiddisaster]

"in that moment
i didn’t want to be caught up in it
didn’t want you to see me
close my eyes but still watch the movie
see the people on the screen
behind my eyelids, shut so tight
so that our scene wouldn’t end
not quite, not that night"

I love that part. tres bien.

 

[everythinginside]

good read, i identify with a lot of this. Those moments where you know can't last, but you learn to live within them, so they don't have to.