Wrote a really awesome musical idea and need some help with lyrical direction

[Droppersneck]

So I will record a video shortly to get the idea. Basically the some has a slow pink floyd esk mellowness back an forth of a iV-V with nuasnced drone notes. The melody starts repetitively and develops into a very distinct memorable note set. The chorus is an Fdim-G-D-C-D works great but afraid Im am steering the song a little too far away from the path. ANy ideas on lyrical content wold help immensely.